Undying Devoir

Spisovateľ/ka: DivineAsHell | Vložené dňa: 8. apríla 2008
http://citanie.madness.sk/view-12451.php

Long ago you were death of my life
Erasing my thoughts erasing my mind
Then we were one ,u were breathing for us
Now its different,Ur producing poisonous gust
so...

Face it now girl!!![Hahahaaa]

Stop making excuses!!!

Youre worthless for my world

Be ashamed for your abuses

Go dig up your grave
Call for your troops
find your releasament
from those milenium roots

Yeah..Whatever you do
dont forget
your presence is nice
But my life is PERFECT
[Without youuuu]
My life is perfect
But you are asking me
to repay you my debt?

Your choices have made me
as evil you think they had
Whether you like it
Im just creation of your deadly net.

Time s running up,
and im waiting for you to take a nap
Cause your noise is waking alive and undead
Pursuing them from rise till the end.

Unconcerned but full of rejection

Unheard and still on seduction

Rewards are not in this auction

Your only choice is servitude ..or freedom

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